New Earth:
Story:
Log Line:
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Pirates crash land
on an alien planet in search of a vast treasure, only to find the planet is in
its prehistoric phase.
Genre:
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Fantasy
- Science Fiction - Action – Suspense
The Story
Alien World - Story is set on an alien planet
during the planets prehistoric phase. Vast enviroments including ocean, forest,
desert, and cave.
Call to Adventure - Crew crash lands on a planet that
has a vast treasure on it. The treasure is enough to put everyone into
retirement 10 times over.
Refusal of Call - Crew crash lands, killing all but the alcoholic captain, the
first mate, and two deck hands. The mission seems impossible
Accepting the Call - They find something left by the last crew that can
lead them to the treasure. Possibly a map on a memory unit.
Entering the Unknown - The four person pirate crew explores an alien planet
with very few weapons and supplies, facing gigantic monsters.
Allies/Helpers- Possible monster ally at mid point
in the story. A golem of some sort.
Tests (rising action) - A monster in the ocean where they crash land, a
monster in the forest that they must face, reanimated bodies of the remains of
another piece of the crew from a crashed escape pod, Final big battle at the
end with undetermined adversary that is coupled by a full mutiny against the
captain.
Climax- Captain sacrifices himself for his mutinous crew,
saying that he'd rather die as a pirate on the planet than live a traitor in
space.
Reward- Crew grabbed a chest that was full of useless
materials, the real portion of the treasure that they were after is left down
on the planet with the captain, who survives.
Characters:
Protagonist(s):
·
Captain
·
Bellamy (First
Mate)
·
Ship hand 1
·
Ship hand 2
·
Friendly monster
Protagonist
Details:
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The Captain is an
alcoholic no nonsense pirate captain who uses alcoholism as a vice to deal with
the long past death of his wife and the empty void of space. His pride is
enough to get him killed.
Age:
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Captain - 50's
·
Bellamy - Late 30's
early 40's
·
Ship hands - 18 to
30
·
Monster - ?
Sex:
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Male
·
Ship hands possible
female/male
Personality of the
Captain:
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Strict
·
Angry
·
Soft spots
·
Alcoholic
·
Acts in interest of
the crew
·
keen
·
Sarcastic
·
sly
·
rebellious
·
Powerful
Values:
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Remains true to his
word
·
Does not tolerate
any form of challenge from his crew
·
Strongly dislikes
being manipulated
·
Hates being forced
to obey
·
Values honor above
all else
Antagonist(s):
- The crew
- The planet
- The monsters
Antagonist(s) details:
- The crew are friends of the captain until the end when
they turn on him to claim the treasure for themselves.
- The plant is an unknown and hostile environment,
that has many dangers on it both living and environmental.
- The monsters come in all shapes and sizes, ranging
from behemoths in the ocean
to small befriend-able creatures that are much like dogs in
the way they act.
